June 23rd, 2008

Umm ...

Challenge debris4spike Story # 3

Last week I challenged you to challenge me - here   and auntiero gave me an opening line "He came awake to the scream of the pterodactyl soaring overhead, the pain of newly drawn breath lancing through his lungs. " ... With the request that I don't use spoilers from either of this seasons Torchwood or Dr Who.

I chose Torchwood and did a short (233 word) story ... I'm not at all happy with how I have done the "voices" ... but see what you think - 

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